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Chapter 2: Page 16

19th Sep 2016, 12:50 AM in 2. Storytelling
Chapter 2: Page 16
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QuotePilgrim 19th Sep 2016, 12:50 AM edit delete
Yeah, the chapter's already over.

I kinda rushed this page in order to be able to upload it today. I need time to study, and if I hadn't drawn this page by now I'd possibly have to wait a week or so before I even started sketching it.

It may not be the best idea to criticize my own work like this but, I feel this chapter is an absolute mess. The pace is way too fast, specially in these last few pages, and I believe that’s because things are happening in an awkward order. In order to somewhat fix this, I am considering changing the order of the pages a little bit – I’m thinking of putting what is currently page 15 before the current page 13, and change whatever lines of dialog may need changing as a result. I am not 100% sure about this though.


Hindbodes 19th Sep 2016, 5:28 AM edit delete reply
Heh, I used to get pissed off at my own comic production state all the time. The only reason I'm not still writing upset opinions about my schedule failures and comic faults is - I'm not even working on a comic right now!