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Chapter 5: Page 4

14th Oct 2017, 12:04 AM in 5. Fall
Chapter 5: Page 4
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Author Notes:

QuotePilgrim 14th Oct 2017, 12:08 AM edit delete
QuotePilgrim
I'm kind of dissatisfied with this chapter's pages so far, but I can't quite put my finger on why.
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Since I'm posting this page 2 days late, next page—which was supposed to be a Monday page—should be up on Tuesday, if everything goes according to plan.

Comments:

khkddn 14th Oct 2017, 1:05 AM edit delete reply
khkddn
familiar smile? the only other character we've seen that's smiled a bunch is heather, idk if that's significant. unless he's just referring to how this thing almost resembles his mom.
QuotePilgrim 16th Oct 2017, 3:57 PM edit delete reply
QuotePilgrim
It probably doesn't come across very well because this comic's characters don't smile very often (or at all, now that I think of it), but I did specifically gave Heather's smile a rather distinctive and kinda weird shape so that it would stick to the reader's mind. Having my other characters not smile so far was kinda unfortunate, because if they did, Heather's smile would stand out quite a lot. So, yeah, you may be onto something.
Hindbodes 15th Oct 2017, 9:04 PM edit delete reply
Hindbodes
Looks like Owen forgot to close the stone lid on the house using his VCR bomb.