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Chapter 4: Page 2

23rd Jan 2017, 12:00 AM in 4. Four Words
Chapter 4: Page 2
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QuotePilgrim 23rd Jan 2017, 12:00 AM edit delete
QuotePilgrim
There's two reasons why there's no SFX for the pillow blowing up. One is because I think maybe this page works better this way, the other one is because I can’t think of one.

If someone suggests something that I think works, I'll consider adding it to this page.

Comments:

khkddn 23rd Jan 2017, 3:13 AM edit delete reply
khkddn
A 'silent' pillow explosion works for me. The narration and the debris in the air make it clear what's happened, and it matches how this is a 'silent' flashback kind of page.
Hindbodes 24th Jan 2017, 3:47 AM edit delete reply
Hindbodes
PKFFK