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Chapter 2: Page 2

4th Feb 2016, 12:00 AM in 2. Storytelling
Chapter 2: Page 2
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QuotePilgrim 4th Feb 2016, 12:00 AM edit delete
QuotePilgrim
Uhh... What’s she smiling about, anyway?
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I'm not a big fan of this page, but I must keep going. The next one’s looking pretty good, at least.

Since I started scripting my pages exclusively in text, rather than doing thumbnails + dialogues, it seems the average number of panels has decreased – which is a good thing. Four panels is the ideal number, IMO, and six should be the maximum.

A lot of earlier pages have too much stuff going on. Page 3 of the first chapter being the worst offender, of course.

Comments:

ranger_brianna_new 24th Oct 2016, 1:24 AM edit delete reply
ranger_brianna_new
I'd normally say she was teasing.

This, however, isn't something she would tease about.
QuotePilgrim 24th Oct 2016, 9:02 AM edit delete reply
QuotePilgrim
Who knows what goes on inside her head.