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Chapter 1: Page 15

7th Jan 2016, 12:00 AM in 1. The Grey Man
Chapter 1: Page 15
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QuotePilgrim 7th Jan 2016, 12:00 AM edit delete
QuotePilgrim
I lost half of the progress on that page due to what I assume was a failure to save it on my part, even though I was 100% positive I had saved it. As a result it took me 3 days to finish. I could have drawn 2-3 pages in that time.

The good thing is that the last panel looks much better than it would if that didn’t happen.

Comments:

JohnnyV 7th Jan 2016, 12:20 AM edit delete reply
JohnnyV
Heh heh. Love how she reacted to that.

You've got a good comic here! Keep it up!
QuotePilgrim 7th Jan 2016, 10:20 AM edit delete reply
QuotePilgrim
Thanks!

I didn’t know how to make she act here, because I don’t really like how I wrote her in the original novella for that specific part, so the comic is deviating a little bit from it.

She was a very challenging character to write overall.
Hindbodes 7th Jan 2016, 2:51 AM edit delete reply
Hindbodes
So obviously we can see that the website they visited didn't have date stamps...
QuotePilgrim 7th Jan 2016, 10:30 AM edit delete reply
QuotePilgrim
The funny thing is that it did, originally, I just accidentally missed that when I was rewriting the original story in comic form, and decided to just go with that.

If that interests you in any way: in the original, Owen notices the date and shows it to Ryan. That doesn’t prevent him from deciding to go to that woman’s apartment.
Hindbodes 7th Jan 2016, 6:52 PM edit delete reply
Hindbodes
Seems I've completely forgotten what the originals were like.